Tuesday 9 May 2017

Welcome back to Term 2

 Welcome back .  This week when I came back to school we wrote a diamante poem that was for Anzac. It was really fun making it. First we had to do a brainstorm of interesting nouns, verbs and adjectives.  Then we chose the best ones to write our poems.  Here is my brainstorm and poem.   We also have a new teacher because are old teacher, Miss Panther, had a baby girl. 






3 comments:

  1. I really like how you have presented your diamante poem, well done.

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  2. Kia Ora Allie, your friend Jasmine here from Mamaku 1 at Grey Main School. Wow I loved how you included your diamante poem ideas. Next time you could include more information not saying you did not have any because you did. Out of a scale one to ten how much fun was this activity?

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