This week we had to make our own dairy entry.We had to write what happen if we were in the explosion said in my story that i had a brother and mum and a dad in my story my dad dies.I enjoyed doing my own dairy it was really fun it was a bit sad to but fun.
Friday 8 March 2019
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Hi Allie! It's Kyra here. I love the way you have presented your diary entry as some people wouldn't have thought to present it like that. I also like the way you have added some pictures relating to the book.
ReplyDeleteI really like the book "The Mine's Afire!" even though it is quite sad at times. What about you?
Maybe next time you could make the writing or google drawing slightly bigger as I found a little hard to read. Awesome blogging and keep it going!
Kyra:)
Hey Allie,
ReplyDeleteGreat diary writing! I really enjoyed how you have tried to show emotion in your writing. I agree with Kyra though, perhaps next time you could make your writing slightly bigger so we can easily read it.
Keep it up,
Miss H