Making our writing more interesting week 7

Making our writing more interesting

This week we have been doing making our writing more interesting. Our teacher asked us to make these sentences better. Here is my writing I done.

The huge, black dog dashed quickly to fetch the red ball.

1. The lady slowly walked across the corn fields.

2. The white cat walked to lay on the sofa.

3. The bird was singing outside the old window.

4. The boy kicked the ball over the wooden  fence.

5. The man said hello and smiled at the lady.

6. The puppies played in the mud park.

7. The children smiled and laughed at the clown.

8. The teacher look at the  school children with a frowned.

9. The carpet feels fluffy and soft and nice between my toes.

10. The dog lay down and yawned.

11. The garden was full of plants and flowers.

12. The sea was smooth quiet and calm.

13. The trees and the plants were moving in the wind.

14. The sky was blue with seagulls flying pass with lots of clouds.

15. The snow was white and felt smooth cold and soft.

16. The birds were flying high in the sky with kites and seagulls.