Monday 28 May 2018

term 2 week 5 the 1 and ivan

this week we have been reading about the 1 and only ivan it is based on a true story he was 400 pounds he like to paint he is a gorilla

1 comment:

  1. Hi Allie.

    I like the way you have added descriptive text about Ivan.
    Maybe next time you could add in a range of punctuation.
    Im looking forward to seeing new posts from you!
    Kind regards Aniya.

    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.